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Your Free Flowing River
Take me down
To where your free-flowing river runs uninhibited
Take me down to your secret garden
To where your nectar is the sweetes
Take me down to your joy
To where your delight grows expectantly
Take me down to your ecstasy
To where your sex comes strong
Take me down,take me down
I want to be free with you.
I want to feast on you
Take me down, take me down
To your free flowing river.
To where your free-flowing river runs uninhibited
Take me down to your secret garden
To where your nectar is the sweetes
Take me down to your joy
To where your delight grows expectantly
Take me down to your ecstasy
To where your sex comes strong
Take me down,take me down
I want to be free with you.
I want to feast on you
Take me down, take me down
To your free flowing river.
Published 15th Mar 2012
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- Edited 15th May 2018 11:42pm
16th Mar 2012 00:11am
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17th Mar 2012 4:48pm
Wow! Trying my hand at this genre more of a storyteller. I'm still new to this so, Thanks So MUCH!
18th Mar 2012 10:34am
I loved the metaphors you have used here of free flowing rivers and gardens. ENjoyed reading this arousing poem.
18th Mar 2012 6:09pm
Thank you so much for the read and especially the comment. It helps this newbie like me to get feedback good or bad. So thanks so much, Mystery Poet. Much love!