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Nortorious tearaway
I'm a little tearaway
no one's got the time of day
for a michevious rebel like me
but no one seems to see:
what the pressure is doing to me!
i'm a nortorious tearaway
you better get out my way
feel free to give my label
i can't help it, my mind's unstable
too much pressure , too may exams
iv'e had enough with all your plans!
you can make us like clones
you can take away our life
but i'll still do whatever i like!
we're all unique, you can't take that away
maybe i'll be better than you one day...
no one's got the time of day
for a michevious rebel like me
but no one seems to see:
what the pressure is doing to me!
i'm a nortorious tearaway
you better get out my way
feel free to give my label
i can't help it, my mind's unstable
too much pressure , too may exams
iv'e had enough with all your plans!
you can make us like clones
you can take away our life
but i'll still do whatever i like!
we're all unique, you can't take that away
maybe i'll be better than you one day...
Published 13th Mar 2012
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13th Mar 2012 10:43pm
Thats the dark mistress I know. The vent; the power: the fuck you society. For old times sakes. Horns up mother fuckers.
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14th Mar 2012 3:33am
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14th Mar 2012 7:29pm
i thank you for your advice ...in real life i'm not afraid to speak my mind , but i'm a nice person, this poem is from another person's point of view and not mine , people think i act like a little 'tearaway' but in fact i'm too nice (alot of my true friends often complain about that!) hope you look at this poem from a different light as i know that it be a bit of a mind fuck when first read, being a label doesn't have all the answers is just the way i want to be ..even if i'll be stoned to death it still won't change my mind , i just want people to see what stereotyping does to people..i hope this poem reaches out to other people in some way! :)
18th Mar 2012 5:52pm
I love that the final line is I might be better than you one day
and on that note the way the poem was structured and the details and imagery were uncomparable to anything I have ever read OR written Paulinna, I love this poem and I hope you do not forget your FUCK YOU! attitude.
and on that note the way the poem was structured and the details and imagery were uncomparable to anything I have ever read OR written Paulinna, I love this poem and I hope you do not forget your FUCK YOU! attitude.