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The Voice of the Mountain
Deep solemn voices speak from within
Falling snow in the dead of night
Like the grand emperor of solitude
Alone humming, cooing -- singing his song
...Om...
Profound silence in a gesture of grandeur
Icy peaks, frost bitten slopes and fierce bitter winds
Chilling the very soul
Harder then stone, colder then ice
The mountain sings its song
From high atop the mountain’s peak he peers out down below
From a solid base I see his face
A mask of ice and snow
Written and published by A Nameless Traveler A.K.A. -Andrew F. R. Kerklaan
Falling snow in the dead of night
Like the grand emperor of solitude
Alone humming, cooing -- singing his song
...Om...
Profound silence in a gesture of grandeur
Icy peaks, frost bitten slopes and fierce bitter winds
Chilling the very soul
Harder then stone, colder then ice
The mountain sings its song
From high atop the mountain’s peak he peers out down below
From a solid base I see his face
A mask of ice and snow
Written and published by A Nameless Traveler A.K.A. -Andrew F. R. Kerklaan
Published 4th Mar 2012
| Edited 17th Mar 2012
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4th Mar 2012 9:59pm
I really like this, as I sat and read this I felt transported to a world of snow and ice with unforgiving mountain peaks.
The clamness between the lines made me think of Tibet and the Tibetanese people, their peacful way of life.
The clamness between the lines made me think of Tibet and the Tibetanese people, their peacful way of life.
4th Mar 2012 10:07pm
hmmm intresting. I tried to write this with a certain element of calm fortitude so I'm glad it came off that way. I meant for it to be like the silent over bearing power and majesty of a mountain -- none in particular but Everst would be a decent assumption. Thanks for the feedback.
8th Mar 2012 7:21am
We must meditate together!
Type in " Oshointernational" into youtube one of these days
Type in " Oshointernational" into youtube one of these days
10th Mar 2012 10:59am
For being such a pric you can write quite well.. I was hopeing otherwise.. nut i gotta give credit where it is due.. this is beautiful..
really this is going to sound self defensish but that comment in the forums wasnt directed towards you in the least devlish it was aimed at the guy that made the thread but thank you for your comment anyways :) sorry for the misinterprutation. I probably should of "quoted" him first... sorry.
11th Mar 2012 12:27pm
So we should both be spanked... Sorry too.. I think i'll stay out of the threads..lol. unless someone wants to battle.. I usually lose what ever game i play but its the playin i enjoy...=)
13th Mar 2012 1:20am
13th Mar 2012 7:58am