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Read Me
Read Me
I don't necessarily believe in love at first sight
But have you ever seen that person, and then a smile comes to your face
That smile that you bite your lip just to hide
When really, nobody is around to notice the way you're letting yourself get vulnerable
That's the smile you give me
But why? Why is that?!
I'v never met you
I probably never will get to hear your accent
See you darling children
But I do know, that before I read your poetry
I see that face and a smile comes
And then I read your poetry
My mind is taken but such vast remarks on how you view things
Words are as fascinating as you are
I hope you see it
I hope you see me
I hope you read me
I don't necessarily believe in love at first sight
But have you ever seen that person, and then a smile comes to your face
That smile that you bite your lip just to hide
When really, nobody is around to notice the way you're letting yourself get vulnerable
That's the smile you give me
But why? Why is that?!
I'v never met you
I probably never will get to hear your accent
See you darling children
But I do know, that before I read your poetry
I see that face and a smile comes
And then I read your poetry
My mind is taken but such vast remarks on how you view things
Words are as fascinating as you are
I hope you see it
I hope you see me
I hope you read me
Published 25th Feb 2012
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25th Feb 2012 2:40pm
your adoration is so strong
its like i can hear your heart long
& words can take any1 to new heights
they can make the heaviest heart become lite
& lucky is the 1 who inspired this
if they knew it was them then im sure their eyes would mist...
its like i can hear your heart long
& words can take any1 to new heights
they can make the heaviest heart become lite
& lucky is the 1 who inspired this
if they knew it was them then im sure their eyes would mist...
25th Feb 2012 7:15pm
This and the See you around one, was actually written to have the same meaning.
Thank you for your wonderful comment Eric. :)
Thank you for your wonderful comment Eric. :)
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25th Feb 2012 4:04pm
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25th Feb 2012 7:15pm
25th Feb 2012 6:35pm
In a world where everything is so superficial.
You may feel a strong passion for someone who can lead to your deepest feelings.
This has already happened to me.
Beautiful poem. :)
You may feel a strong passion for someone who can lead to your deepest feelings.
This has already happened to me.
Beautiful poem. :)
25th Feb 2012 7:16pm
25th Feb 2012 10:40pm
26th Feb 2012 6:30am
26th Feb 2012 11:03pm
Your sarcasm is out of place.
Condolences are made for the dead.
If you do not want me to comment your poems, just say so.
Condolences are made for the dead.
If you do not want me to comment your poems, just say so.
2nd Mar 2012 9:16am
I don't know what to say (for once in my life ) other than you've moved me with this , it's so honest in it's own clandestine way , thankyou :)
2nd Mar 2012 8:39pm
2nd Mar 2012 10:22pm