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Trade My Soul For Yours
Trade My Soul For Yours
If I trade you my undying soul would you give me my heart back
My memory fades like the smoke that I tossed to the ground
The only life left in us is the ashes that are greeted by the cold dirt, only to vanish into nothing forever more
Now that we are dead and gone I realized where I got off track
Even though we're over, I can see where I lost my heart
And traded my soul for a better difference
When I enter these woods of hope
I am surrounded by lifeless trees that only make me want to surrender
Because all they remind me of is life, and how we could be
But all I'm stuck with is the remembrance
If I trade you my undying soul would you give me my heart back
My memory fades like the smoke that I tossed to the ground
The only life left in us is the ashes that are greeted by the cold dirt, only to vanish into nothing forever more
Now that we are dead and gone I realized where I got off track
Even though we're over, I can see where I lost my heart
And traded my soul for a better difference
When I enter these woods of hope
I am surrounded by lifeless trees that only make me want to surrender
Because all they remind me of is life, and how we could be
But all I'm stuck with is the remembrance
Published 23rd Feb 2012
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- Edited 16th May 2018 9:38pm
24th Feb 2012 4:01am
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25th Feb 2012 6:43pm
"The only life left in us is the ashes that are greeted by the cold dirt, only to vanish into nothing forever more"
Great poetry
I was transported reading it.
You have talent. Congratulations.
Great poetry
I was transported reading it.
You have talent. Congratulations.
25th Feb 2012 7:18pm