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The Bitter Escape

There he lie as the blood covered his face
No more he would cry
No more torture in this regretable place;
He wishes he could just die
Searching for the gun that he got from his dad  
He inserts the clip and cocks the gun -
Remembering the things he once loved made him sad
But he cold not take the torment anymore of others fun
A final saying he let out
"I'm sorry mom and dad but I cannot do this any longer"
A pitter patter lay upon the roof and ended the seasonal drought
He frowned as he knew he could be stronger
But when he remembered the last of his friends who left him behind
Joining others in his ever growing pain
Now here he stands alone and reconciles his mind
He already pulled the trigger that released his bloody stain
There he lie upon the floor and finally closes his eyes
There he lay as his dies.
Written by R4V3N
Published | Edited 9th Mar 2012
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