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It's A Sin to be a Philosopher.
Thinking about things that have no real meaning
Attempting to find truth within many more truths
Delving deeper into an unknown territory
Becoming wrought with confusion and terrific error
Being insightful can sometimes mean 'Terror'
To think of what feelings really are
Is it supposed to be felt by those from afar?
So fragile these topics as I scratch at their panes
Writing words that I just cannot refrain from
Many a time has this hand broke through the glass
A mistake
An error
The pressure too vast
The scars on my hand served well with a flask
Filled with a potion known as the Past
How bitter yet satisfying this nectar may be
Yet you never knowing how hard it is to flee
It traps you with it's intoxicating scent
Holding you tightly until you repent
The lies and the feelings
Swirling within your brain
There is not enough time to explain this pain.
To look within is to see into hell
A terrible furnace where the years had all fell
Burning smoke to suffocate your head
Tempting you to grab the gun
To 'Kill yourself dead'.
In these moment's it is hard to remember
Where we all belong in this world asunder
But do not ponder on these things too long
Else it won't be you singing your song.
Published 5th Feb 2012
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5th Feb 2012 11:16pm
Yes, Chandler. Live your life the way you want it. and not as dictated. Good read.
5th Feb 2012 11:56pm
Dogmatism and skepticism are both, in a sense, absolute philosophies; one is certain of knowing, the other of not knowing. What philosophy should dissipate is certainty, whether of knowledge or ignorance. Only not to be proven but to ponder by. My philosophy is shit! Shit is energy. If you fused shit together they maybe a big shit bomb. No matter what it's still shit! Just as philosophy. 3 types of people. 1. Who wonders why it happened
2. Who wonders what may happen
3. People that make things happen and forget 1&2
survey says #3. 1&2 you are the weakest link bub bye.
STANDING UP AND CLAPPING FRIEND. I have argued this on the discussion at DUP!
2. Who wonders what may happen
3. People that make things happen and forget 1&2
survey says #3. 1&2 you are the weakest link bub bye.
STANDING UP AND CLAPPING FRIEND. I have argued this on the discussion at DUP!
6th Feb 2012 1:16am
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6th Feb 2012 6:00pm
This is something a few of my older poems are based around.
I also liked how subtle the rhyme scheme was up until around half way, or maybe that was just me.
Keep writing ;)
I also liked how subtle the rhyme scheme was up until around half way, or maybe that was just me.
Keep writing ;)
13th Feb 2012 00:27am
Delving deeper down and down until you dig too deep. Deep where thoughts drown and feelings die. The Philosopher's Doom.
Or be light and airy while thinking deep; strike like a meteorite, filled deep with minerals and free from drowning thoughts. Do tell me if you find out how to always feel this.
Or be light and airy while thinking deep; strike like a meteorite, filled deep with minerals and free from drowning thoughts. Do tell me if you find out how to always feel this.