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Dispersed Insanity
My life means nothing in the eyes of my carnal mind.
Lust fills my adulterated soul
attracting dark meaningless love
My mind is haunted of twisted thoughts
turned inside out and backwards
plugged up and trapped
in a revolution started by myself
My body becomes infected
destroying all who participate
I am tortured by my own presence
I have destroyed visions of reconcilitation
uniting with all that lies inside
I am poisoned with corrupted solitude
left alone to fight the insanity
dwelling upon the anguish
and misery
It spreads
The unstoppable has advanced into the life of many
tearing apart the attached souls
as they mourn for the lost passion
never to return
only having others follow
their corps to the grave
The war will never end
Victory will never prevail
The end of time is the only escape...
Lust fills my adulterated soul
attracting dark meaningless love
My mind is haunted of twisted thoughts
turned inside out and backwards
plugged up and trapped
in a revolution started by myself
My body becomes infected
destroying all who participate
I am tortured by my own presence
I have destroyed visions of reconcilitation
uniting with all that lies inside
I am poisoned with corrupted solitude
left alone to fight the insanity
dwelling upon the anguish
and misery
It spreads
The unstoppable has advanced into the life of many
tearing apart the attached souls
as they mourn for the lost passion
never to return
only having others follow
their corps to the grave
The war will never end
Victory will never prevail
The end of time is the only escape...
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holy shit
2nd Feb 2012 2:23am
rachel...there is nothing to say accept this is the best poem i have ever read. im talking about all the greats included...poe...shakespear...plath...they have nothing on this...fucking bravo, seriously. i am beyond impressed
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re: holy shit
2nd Feb 2012 2:38am
Wow...that is the best compliment I have ever received. I am floored, honored and humbled. Thank you so much!
re: re: holy shit
2nd Feb 2012 2:54am
hahaha YOU are floored, honored, and humbled? i cant even imagine having my feeble attempts at poetry standing next to such achievements as this...i am going to read every poem you have wrote on here ;) im sure they are just as amazing
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2nd Feb 2012 3:47am
I just write. I always hope it touches someone in someway, but I never believe that it is great poetry. So it always floor's me when someone else does.
I do hope you like the rest just as well. :)
I do hope you like the rest just as well. :)
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re: wow
2nd Feb 2012 2:40am
Not even
2nd Feb 2012 2:48am
For me, insanity is super sanity. The normal is psychotic. Normal means lack of imagination, lack of creativity. You know if their is anybody that I love to comment on; it's you. Your replies are just a great as your writes. Not to ridicule your writes, but only to complement them.
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re: Not even
2nd Feb 2012 3:44am
I am not sure where I read this, but it stayed with me.
"I'm not crazy, I just think my twisted ass fantasy has more sanity than the insanity of reality."
I agree with you. "Normal", is boring. People might think we are crazy, but at least they are thinking about us...makes us interesting. :)
I always look forward to your comments A. It is always a pleasure. :)
"I'm not crazy, I just think my twisted ass fantasy has more sanity than the insanity of reality."
I agree with you. "Normal", is boring. People might think we are crazy, but at least they are thinking about us...makes us interesting. :)
I always look forward to your comments A. It is always a pleasure. :)
:)
2nd Feb 2012 4:22am
Wow, makes me think my work belongs on a cereal box:) very impressed. Thank you for your flower.
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re: :)
2nd Feb 2012 4:35am
:D I wouldn't mind MY work being on a cereal box...lots of people read those things. :)
Anyway, thank you so much for the compliment. It truly means a lot to me!
Anyway, thank you so much for the compliment. It truly means a lot to me!
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2nd Feb 2012 7:07am
rachel
25th Feb 2012 6:08am
quite something.
it's a rush of emotion and very well put too.
dark in its content, unforgiving and almost " couldn't give a flying fuck " in it's attitude.
i applaud this write.
shine on !
it's a rush of emotion and very well put too.
dark in its content, unforgiving and almost " couldn't give a flying fuck " in it's attitude.
i applaud this write.
shine on !
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26th Feb 2012 2:10am
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16th Jun 2012 6:20am
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