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Bloodthirsty Vengeance (A sort've Metalcore lyric)
A bloody death awaits your soul
You've tried my will and patience
So your payment in blood I crave
You shall not survive
You shall bleed from me
You will fucking die
I'll fucking rip you apart
Breaking one bone at at time
Savoring each cry of pain you emit
In Hell you'll burn from my vengeance
But not before I torture endlessly
Your damned body while it still lives
Come at me if you think you can
Death will await you with black jaws
And I'll close them on your throat
I'll fucking rip you apart
Breaking one bone at at time
Savoring each cry of pain you emit
It's time for you to die
It's time for veins to break
Now you'll know suffering
You shall not survive
You shall bleed from me
You will fucking die
I'll fucking rip you apart
Breaking one bone at at time
Savoring each cry of pain you emit
I'll fucking rip you apart
Breaking one bone at at time
Savoring each cry of pain you emit
I'll fucking drink your blood
From the veins that I tear
As you die from my bloodthirsty vengeance
Owned by Dustin Smith: Bastardofbodom666
You've tried my will and patience
So your payment in blood I crave
You shall not survive
You shall bleed from me
You will fucking die
I'll fucking rip you apart
Breaking one bone at at time
Savoring each cry of pain you emit
In Hell you'll burn from my vengeance
But not before I torture endlessly
Your damned body while it still lives
Come at me if you think you can
Death will await you with black jaws
And I'll close them on your throat
I'll fucking rip you apart
Breaking one bone at at time
Savoring each cry of pain you emit
It's time for you to die
It's time for veins to break
Now you'll know suffering
You shall not survive
You shall bleed from me
You will fucking die
I'll fucking rip you apart
Breaking one bone at at time
Savoring each cry of pain you emit
I'll fucking rip you apart
Breaking one bone at at time
Savoring each cry of pain you emit
I'll fucking drink your blood
From the veins that I tear
As you die from my bloodthirsty vengeance
Owned by Dustin Smith: Bastardofbodom666
Published 30th Jan 2012
| Edited 20th Mar 2012
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31st Jan 2012 7:15am
This is a very angry lyric, would work well in a metalcore song though. Possibly even something a little heavier.
One piece of friendly advice, while cursing is a good way to show anger in a song, sometimes it cheapens it. I'm not saying it cheapened this one, but be careful that it doesn't happen to your other lyrics.
Great job.
One piece of friendly advice, while cursing is a good way to show anger in a song, sometimes it cheapens it. I'm not saying it cheapened this one, but be careful that it doesn't happen to your other lyrics.
Great job.
