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blue
this sweet, liquid
induced state of serenity
floating casually, peacefully
on these waves of illusion
glorious blue of my mind
contrasting the sterile white
I am dizzy
and being carried away
induced state of serenity
floating casually, peacefully
on these waves of illusion
glorious blue of my mind
contrasting the sterile white
I am dizzy
and being carried away
Published 15th Jan 2012
| Edited 17th Jan 2012
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15th Jan 2012 7:02pm
enjoyable yet incomplete... you gave me directions! but only half way. a lil abuse of the word (of) show us you are capable of being creative even in simple terms
16th Jan 2012 1:55am
I'm tending to agree with you Caos.. This little poem feels as though it should be apart of something bigger..
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15th Jan 2012 9:28pm
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16th Jan 2012 1:59am
Hey Gabe :)
I'm on pain meds at the moment, have been in hospital since new years eve after a nasty fall down a flight of stairs. I broke my leg in two places and shattered my ankle and have been stuck in this hospital bed for weeks. If it wasn't for these delicious meds I would be going crazy..
Harp xx
I'm on pain meds at the moment, have been in hospital since new years eve after a nasty fall down a flight of stairs. I broke my leg in two places and shattered my ankle and have been stuck in this hospital bed for weeks. If it wasn't for these delicious meds I would be going crazy..
Harp xx
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16th Jan 2012 3:50pm
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5th Feb 2012 8:21am
Clouds come floating into my life, no longer to carry rain or usher storm, but to add color to my sunset sky. Spaced for anticipation for each word. Great tatic
29th May 2012 5:38am
I like this, it had a relaxing effect on me as I read along and pictured it in my mind.
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18th Sep 2012 9:41am
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18th Sep 2012 10:40am
Morphine in fact.. I fell down some stairs in January and broke my leg in 5 different places and after surgery was put on morphine for the pain.. Crazy stuff indeed!!
20th Jan 2013 9:34pm
in earlyer messages you said that you broke it in 2 spots and that you were on pain meds. but any way i hope thatyou get better broken bones r no fun
