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For Us
I have an insatiable craving
a greedy intense thirst
a ravenous demand
For you
My electricity is aroused
unfueled fire inflamed
desired honey a river
You have a wanting addiction
a mouth watering compulsion
a voracious hunger
For me
Your passion is enlivened
ferocious ecstasy awakened
unwavering firmness alive
We have a breathless urgency
an exhilarating eagerness
a mind blowing acceleration
For us
Our gratification is blissful
climax harmonious
happiness heavenly
a greedy intense thirst
a ravenous demand
For you
My electricity is aroused
unfueled fire inflamed
desired honey a river
You have a wanting addiction
a mouth watering compulsion
a voracious hunger
For me
Your passion is enlivened
ferocious ecstasy awakened
unwavering firmness alive
We have a breathless urgency
an exhilarating eagerness
a mind blowing acceleration
For us
Our gratification is blissful
climax harmonious
happiness heavenly
Published 9th Jan 2012
| Edited 20th May 2012
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Anonymous
- Edited 14th May 2018 5:40pm
9th Jan 2012 8:43am
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Anonymous
- Edited 15th May 2018 7:56pm
9th Jan 2012 8:48am
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9th Jan 2012 8:55am
9th Jan 2012 10:21am
"We have a breathless urgency
Our gratification is blissful"
two lines that are etched in my brain
Our gratification is blissful"
two lines that are etched in my brain
9th Jan 2012 12:17pm
9th Jan 2012 11:05am
9th Jan 2012 12:17pm
Only when I am writing am I able to tap into any of my emotions. Thanks so much for the compliment. :)
Anonymous
- Edited 15th May 2018 11:42pm
9th Jan 2012 3:06pm
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9th Jan 2012 5:27pm
Thank you so much nightspirit! What a fantastic compliment. I am so glad that you enjoyed it. :)
9th Jan 2012 10:12pm
Erotica is my favorite.
I love the fact I could visualize without the vulgarity that comes with most erotica.
Great job.
I love the fact I could visualize without the vulgarity that comes with most erotica.
Great job.
9th Jan 2012 10:21pm
10th Jan 2012 5:57am
Each to be and individual then combined as one. It was wrote (I think with) as if at that given time nothing else exsisted but you and him. Great write
10th Jan 2012 6:38am
10th Jan 2012 1:22pm
10th Jan 2012 1:36pm
21st Jan 2012 11:30am
just a mere taste
of the lips on your face
can stimulate those below your waist
to feel me stroke at a steady pace
until you arrive at that special place
where you climax at every trace
of flesh as our frames race
to xxxstacy where only bliss is laced....;)
of the lips on your face
can stimulate those below your waist
to feel me stroke at a steady pace
until you arrive at that special place
where you climax at every trace
of flesh as our frames race
to xxxstacy where only bliss is laced....;)
22nd Jan 2012 4:47pm
22nd Jan 2012 11:43am
Nice piece of work, Rachel. I enjoyed its verve and the sheer enjoyment of being in love. Cheered my morning.
22nd Jan 2012 4:47pm
Anonymous
- Edited 13th May 2018 9:36pm
23rd Apr 2012 6:48am
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24th Apr 2012 3:09am
That is a huge compliment. Though not long lasting after I give you a list of names I think are much better.
Much appreciated the same though...I am so touched you feel that way about my work. :)
Much appreciated the same though...I am so touched you feel that way about my work. :)
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Anonymous
- Edited 18th Nov 2022 2:35am
15th May 2012 5:27am
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15th May 2012 6:21am
Porn star? Goodness! I certainly didn't mean to.
It's a bit out of my comfort zone reading that.
Your response cracked me up though! Sure, I will read the shampoo bottle, lol.
Thanks for the feedback.
It's a bit out of my comfort zone reading that.
Your response cracked me up though! Sure, I will read the shampoo bottle, lol.
Thanks for the feedback.
Anonymous
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15th May 2012 4:37pm
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15th May 2012 5:13pm
Thank you! Suductive is what I was going for. That makes me feel better. I am so glad you stopped by. :)
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24th Jul 2012 1:44am
I've read many of your pieces and this is the first I've hit your audio. I heard your 3 in the competition and your voice adds MUCH to each.
24th Jul 2012 6:14am