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Under the Soil
Decomposed panchreas oozing out
Ingesting the cadaveric flesh
Juice produced by bactheria that lived on the deceased
Larva and leech feasting undergroud.
Coming from insides, expelled through spasms
A soda of organic elements, swollen with lymph
The scent summoning the carcass eaters
Cockroaches, weevils and else
Ripped muscles, rended and chopped
Poor suckling...Soon she will be nothing but dust
Gutted, it is feast to the maggots
Disemboweled, a barbecue of putrid tissues
Hacked, there is no respite in this matter
Dismembered, butchered under the soil
Raped, burst and stretched genitals.
Ingesting the cadaveric flesh
Juice produced by bactheria that lived on the deceased
Larva and leech feasting undergroud.
Coming from insides, expelled through spasms
A soda of organic elements, swollen with lymph
The scent summoning the carcass eaters
Cockroaches, weevils and else
Ripped muscles, rended and chopped
Poor suckling...Soon she will be nothing but dust
Gutted, it is feast to the maggots
Disemboweled, a barbecue of putrid tissues
Hacked, there is no respite in this matter
Dismembered, butchered under the soil
Raped, burst and stretched genitals.
Published 16th Dec 2011
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17th Dec 2011 1:45am
Although this is an extream poem, and while it may be dark, in my opinion, you tried too hard on makeing it "morbid" and thus lost the motive and meaning behind your writing. Keep this in mind: when you read a poem, and you think "gross, graphic, extreem" and nothing else... you lost the meaning in the translation from mind and soul to paper.
17th Dec 2011 1:23pm
Thank you very much! I write what comes to my mind, the inspiration often comes from nowhere.
17th Dec 2011 7:16pm
4th Feb 2012 1:59am
20th Dec 2011 10:09pm
honestly i lke t and you should chang nothing about it,,i think you didnt rush its just how it flows..i like it:)
