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Suicidal Thoughts
Full of grief, misery and pain
Condemned with a blemished soul
unable to be disabled
Destroyed since creation
created from destruction.
Relished in erotic pleasures
that bring no pleasure to my heart
Crippled by my weakness
but strong in my beliefs
though it cannot help my soul
For I know soon I will
for no reason at all, die
there is no purpose to live
so farewell
for I am the one left far behind
© Rachel Orrick
Condemned with a blemished soul
unable to be disabled
Destroyed since creation
created from destruction.
Relished in erotic pleasures
that bring no pleasure to my heart
Crippled by my weakness
but strong in my beliefs
though it cannot help my soul
For I know soon I will
for no reason at all, die
there is no purpose to live
so farewell
for I am the one left far behind
© Rachel Orrick
Written by
raorrick
(Rachel O.)
Published 14th Dec 2011
| Edited 9th Feb 2013
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Destryed since creation
14th Dec 2011 7:35pm
re: Destryed since creation
14th Dec 2011 8:14pm
Anonymous
- Edited 15th May 2018 11:42pm
14th Dec 2011 8:54pm
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re: awwwww
14th Dec 2011 9:39pm
This poem
15th Dec 2011 2:57am
describes my exact feelings today.
Thanks for putting in words that I was unable to at this moment.
Keep these good pieces coming.
Thanks for putting in words that I was unable to at this moment.
Keep these good pieces coming.
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re: This poem
15th Dec 2011 3:16am
First let me start by saying how sorry I am that you felt so horrible today.
I am glad that I was able to help you express yourself through my words. That is the ultimate compliment to me. I really hope that tomorrow brings you much better feelings, a much better day. :)
I am glad that I was able to help you express yourself through my words. That is the ultimate compliment to me. I really hope that tomorrow brings you much better feelings, a much better day. :)
Anonymous
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15th Dec 2011 4:06am
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re: .......
15th Dec 2011 4:28am
A road well travelled
15th Dec 2011 12:34pm
I've been down this path many times and can relate to these feelings. I don't know how I got to be so old after all the times I decided this would be my last day. You have written well in this poem and I hope it does not become one of your last, as I don't believe anyone is born with a purpose. Discover a path of your own and don't let the crazy world around you decide that path for you. Trying to live up to the expectations of others is the pointless part of life, just explore and discover and you will one day look back and see a life full of adventures, love and happiness. jj
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re: A road well travelled
16th Dec 2011 4:06am
Thank you for your kind words of encouragement. It won't be my last. I actually wrote this years ago as a teenager and found it recently. I have long since discovered my purpose when I had my three kids. I wanted to share it because I know how hard it can be to express yourself in certain moments of our lives. Sometimes, I myself, will look for someone to do it for me.
Your words ring very true. :)
Your words ring very true. :)
Wow...
27th Dec 2011 2:46am
I saw your comment where you said you wrote this as a teenager... I was speechless... I hope what I write, now and in the future, is at least half as good as what you write. Love your writing very much!!!
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re: Wow...
27th Dec 2011 4:09am
Anonymous
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5th Jan 2012 8:57pm
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re: Short .'n' sweet
5th Jan 2012 10:35pm
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