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I wish…
Once you were my companion,
my friend and also my lover,
all that in life truly mattered
then my world stopped and shattered.
Somehow I wish here you were again
still my friend, that you were near;
it seems sometimes if I just dream
by some means you would be here.
If I could just hear your voice again
I perhaps could comprehend;
dreaming of you, time stands still
although I realize, hear you, I never will.
Cold and monumental stone gargoyles
see my passing insignificantly,
they seem wrong as companions,
you were gentle and warm, my D'Artanian.
Too many days fighting back tears
struggling with unspoken fears.
Just die past I so despise!
All you bring is agony without compromise!
I catch myself wishing you were here again
sharing an embrace dispelling fear’s reign
always knowing that after goodbye
there is nothing but an emptiness that won’t subside.
Try to forgive,
you asked me to live,
gave me the strength to try,
to never give up and dream as big as the sky!
No more memories or silent tears,
gazing across the wasted days and quiet fears,
to accept the inevitable, help me say goodbye,
to end this burgeoning love, once so sublime.
Gypsy red
Dec.2011
Published 14th Dec 2011
| Edited 15th Dec 2011
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14th Dec 2011 1:28am
14th Dec 2011 2:51pm
Thank you very much for the visit and reading my piece, I am glad you liked it.
Gypsy red
Gypsy red
14th Dec 2011 5:18am
14th Dec 2011 2:53pm
Well thank you very much for the generous comment I appreciate the enthusiasm, glad you liked it.
gypsy red
gypsy red
19th Dec 2011 5:05am
Sad in the sense that there seems to be a relationship that the subject can't get past and the resignation that the options aren't many.
19th Dec 2011 4:24pm
You my friend Jazz, are absolutly correct, the subject was blindsided and left with more questions than answers and so does not know how to reconcile his/herself with the unalterable end result.Thanks for stopping by to read and comment.
Gypsy red
Gypsy red
19th Dec 2011 4:28pm
24th Dec 2011 5:45am
I found myself not wanting to stop reading this piece....you are a very good writer.
24th Dec 2011 1:58pm
I am honored Ms.Momma, it motivates me all the more to strive to do better, thank you very much for taking the time to read my piece and comment glad you enjoyed it.
Gypsy red
Gypsy red