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58 Minutes - The Changing Room
Fine[/font][/font]
if that's what you think[/font][/font]
No, [/font][/font]
it's nothing[/font][/font]
Carry on[/font][/font]
(long sigh[/font][/font]
short sigh)[/font][/font]
Thanks a lot[/font][/font]
(eye roll [/font][/font]
foot tap)[/font][/font]
Please do[/font][/font]
You're a man[/font][/font]
so who needs [/font][/font]
your opinion [/font][/font]
anyway[/font][/font]
I'm sorry I asked[/font][/font]
I should know by now[/font][/font]
not to bother[/font][/font]
I'll just change[/font][/font]
I'll only be [/font][/font]
another five minutes...[/font][/font]
if that's what you think[/font][/font]
No, [/font][/font]
it's nothing[/font][/font]
Carry on[/font][/font]
(long sigh[/font][/font]
short sigh)[/font][/font]
Thanks a lot[/font][/font]
(eye roll [/font][/font]
foot tap)[/font][/font]
Please do[/font][/font]
You're a man[/font][/font]
so who needs [/font][/font]
your opinion [/font][/font]
anyway[/font][/font]
I'm sorry I asked[/font][/font]
I should know by now[/font][/font]
not to bother[/font][/font]
I'll just change[/font][/font]
I'll only be [/font][/font]
another five minutes...[/font][/font]
Published 6th Jan 2010
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- Edited 14th May 2018 11:51pm
6th Jan 2010 4:26pm
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6th Jan 2010 4:47pm
This was a first attempt at writing in 'woman-speak' and as with learning any new language there are always vocabulary related problems. Thanks for the comment, Jack.
6th Jan 2010 4:51pm
First, I laughed. Then I read it again and felt kind of sad. That's just about epitomizes living. I think that's why it had such an impact.
And the phrasing is excellent.
And the phrasing is excellent.
6th Jan 2010 5:47pm
Thanks Merda - this piece was very carefully considered and I'm pleased you approve. (Hope you're nice and warm in that shed, by the way!)
6th Jan 2010 6:54pm