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5th Dec 2011 1:26am
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5th Dec 2011 9:39am
im glad it encourages you to think. I should thank you for your feedback Jack
Perfect...
5th Dec 2011 10:15am
The use of 'smaller and smaller' is just perfect over here and exactly to the pace of the subject you wished to draw. This is beautiful!
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:)
5th Dec 2011 4:35pm
A tiny bomb
that has thoughts
for sharpels and
afterthoughts for
gun powder.
Bravo.
curtsy,
S'
that has thoughts
for sharpels and
afterthoughts for
gun powder.
Bravo.
curtsy,
S'
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Awesome!!!
6th Dec 2011 1:55am
This is one of the best I've ever read. the shorter the better. That's why I read poetry because the books can be short. Keep up the good work!!! www.writerighton.com
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re: Awesome!!!
6th Dec 2011 2:04am
amazing
7th Dec 2011 11:10pm