deepundergroundpoetry.com
Couches
Feels like clouds
Feels like hot summer days
Something sends chills
Something feels smooth
Smell of ocean and soft mint
hazed minds
racing
speeding
Its over
It breaks
loving
Caring
Lied to
Crumbling down
Its raining
Loud thunder
Its over
By: Bethany
Feels like hot summer days
Something sends chills
Something feels smooth
Smell of ocean and soft mint
hazed minds
racing
speeding
Its over
It breaks
loving
Caring
Lied to
Crumbling down
Its raining
Loud thunder
Its over
By: Bethany
Published 1st Dec 2011
| Edited 5th Apr 2012
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
likes 3
reading list entries 0
comments 2
reads 138
Commenting Preference:
The author encourages honest critique.
Anonymous
- Edited 14th May 2018 5:40pm
5th Dec 2011 7:45pm
<< post removed >>
6th Dec 2011 2:06am
Thank you, And yes it does, and the title... I think i should change that but i also think it would make people wonder when they read it. I do repeat words purposly tho. But thankyou for your honesty :)
