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My World.
I sit back and watch it all happen.
My world is falling apart..
My friends, all forgotten.
The only thing I have left is him.
He loves me one second,
and I'm filth another.
He hits me and breaks me,
then we make love.
He pushes me into corners,
and kicks me until I'm black and blue.
He kisses my bruises,
saying, "How could I do this to you??"
I love.
I hate.
What do I feel?
I do not know...
For the emotions have all left me.
I am nothing.
I am nothin.
I am nothi.
I am noth.
I am not.
I am no.
I am n.
I am.
I a.
I.
I a.
I am.
I am s.
I am st.
I am str.
I am stro.
I am stron.
I am strong.
I am stronge.
I am stronger.
My world is falling apart..
My friends, all forgotten.
The only thing I have left is him.
He loves me one second,
and I'm filth another.
He hits me and breaks me,
then we make love.
He pushes me into corners,
and kicks me until I'm black and blue.
He kisses my bruises,
saying, "How could I do this to you??"
I love.
I hate.
What do I feel?
I do not know...
For the emotions have all left me.
I am nothing.
I am nothin.
I am nothi.
I am noth.
I am not.
I am no.
I am n.
I am.
I a.
I.
I a.
I am.
I am s.
I am st.
I am str.
I am stro.
I am stron.
I am strong.
I am stronge.
I am stronger.
Published 14th Nov 2011
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15th Nov 2011 3:50pm
Nothing is everything and everything is nothing. Subsequently, I think you Know exactly what you you feel. If you didnt then how would you have written this?
Some introspection here, how could You do this to You? Stronger are you sure? Hmm, i think so you were strong enough to write this putting thoughts to paper and strong enough to post this letting DUP into your world.
Your past maybe 'beautifully broken'but future is spotless and untouched and the present is now. Buck up kiddo :)
Some introspection here, how could You do this to You? Stronger are you sure? Hmm, i think so you were strong enough to write this putting thoughts to paper and strong enough to post this letting DUP into your world.
Your past maybe 'beautifully broken'but future is spotless and untouched and the present is now. Buck up kiddo :)
18th Nov 2011 10:13pm
Thanks for the comment, it means a lot:)
I love the feedback you give! I think this may have been the best comment I've ever received. :)
I love the feedback you give! I think this may have been the best comment I've ever received. :)
19th Nov 2011 2:41pm
Well I'm very pleased that you feel so. Yes feedback is always good. You are most welcome!
Ask and an answer will be give :p
Ask and an answer will be give :p