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Love's Cliche
Once,
we fucked every chance we could
like two turkeys
a skinny one and a fat one
hammer and tong
riding a last chance train
beating a non-stop tune
the night before Thanksgiving
Now I hunger
after the thinnest peck
our habits icy familiar
see-sawing moods
on a donkey clock of contempt
braying for space
to lick our wounds in separate rooms
Once,
you'd rush to spirit me away
anywhere and everywhere
We'd damn our souls to hell & back
just to be together
and when we couldn't find heaven
for two bits and a dream
we'd make it for ourselves
In the distance
I hear the fading sound of I love you's
watch the mask of your passion
slipping by the day
and somehow
once,
those words seemed all they meant
when we were happily content
to stay in love with love's cliche.
we fucked every chance we could
like two turkeys
a skinny one and a fat one
hammer and tong
riding a last chance train
beating a non-stop tune
the night before Thanksgiving
Now I hunger
after the thinnest peck
our habits icy familiar
see-sawing moods
on a donkey clock of contempt
braying for space
to lick our wounds in separate rooms
Once,
you'd rush to spirit me away
anywhere and everywhere
We'd damn our souls to hell & back
just to be together
and when we couldn't find heaven
for two bits and a dream
we'd make it for ourselves
In the distance
I hear the fading sound of I love you's
watch the mask of your passion
slipping by the day
and somehow
once,
those words seemed all they meant
when we were happily content
to stay in love with love's cliche.
Published 8th Nov 2011
| Edited 15th Feb 2013
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Anonymous
- Edited 14th May 2018 10:07pm
8th Nov 2011 11:35am
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8th Nov 2011 4:03pm
and expertly told with every whistle and bell ringing only the faint echoes of cliches, somehow managing to make them sound like this is where they've belonged all along. Wonderful work, Abra.
Thanks for the tingle
- your insights always valuable, Jolais.
Best ~ Abra
- your insights always valuable, Jolais.
Best ~ Abra
Anonymous
- Edited 8th Nov 2011 6:54pm
8th Nov 2011 6:52pm
Maybe too much to ask that familiarity remain as exciting and fresh as it once was. It sticks to the surfaces and settles there. Hard to see past it.
Fantastic write Abra
Fantastic write Abra
8th Nov 2011 8:26pm
... soon settles into a snarl of contempt unless you constantly work hard at keeping things fresh.
I've always been too lazy or too stupid to succeed at that.
Thanks for your kind words, Vi - your feedback is always appreciated.
Best ~ Abra
I've always been too lazy or too stupid to succeed at that.
Thanks for your kind words, Vi - your feedback is always appreciated.
Best ~ Abra
Anonymous
- Edited 14th May 2018 11:51pm
11th Nov 2011 00:16am
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7th Dec 2011 2:28pm
This poem sticks out to me because of situations and things I've been through. It brings out understanding of fading love and I really enjoyed it.
10th Apr 2012 5:08pm
glad i came across you- amazing in many ways...ill eloborate more as i familiarize myself with more of your writes