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Joker!
Joker!
Your many faces,
You spin in circles.
Dancing around others.
Trying to play your little game on them.
Some will laugh and play along until its to late.
Others will see through your many faces.
your true face!
Your lips sown in a permanent frown.
Your eyes glazed over in tears.
Tears of sorrow towards those who play your game until its to late.
Until there last step is the step that gives them over to hell.
For those who see through your faces feel sorry.
But only for a moment.
Then they realize what you have done to get the many faces.
Will you be fooled by the faces.
OR
Will you stop the game before it begins?
Your many faces,
You spin in circles.
Dancing around others.
Trying to play your little game on them.
Some will laugh and play along until its to late.
Others will see through your many faces.
your true face!
Your lips sown in a permanent frown.
Your eyes glazed over in tears.
Tears of sorrow towards those who play your game until its to late.
Until there last step is the step that gives them over to hell.
For those who see through your faces feel sorry.
But only for a moment.
Then they realize what you have done to get the many faces.
Will you be fooled by the faces.
OR
Will you stop the game before it begins?
Published 2nd Nov 2011
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3rd Nov 2011 11:33pm
Splendid. The varying length of the lines lends itself well to the pacing of the poem and the question at the end is an intriguing technique. One issue I had is that the full stops at the end of every line did somewhat stunt the flow and make it stutter, though this is more of a personal preference rather than a criticism. Bravo.
5th Nov 2011 8:59pm
thank you. im just starting to really write poetry so i thank you verry much for the commnet.
