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Consummation
eyes worm
bubbles glow
synapses sparkle
retina bleeds
imagination blooms
as life kicks in
at the caesura
of the small naval
counterpointing
the serrated comma
the womb sings
an opus of fulfillment
soul dances on tiptoes
as the body becomes
a collage
of the collective immediacy
of emotions
it is the seamless beyond
of senses
a gamma burst of white
superlative
Published 1st Nov 2011
| Edited 18th Jun 2012
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1st Nov 2011 11:30pm
consummation supreme, the planting and the seeding, the receiving and the taking. Love grows deep on planted furrows. Mysticism in a simple act. Good read Whitewand6.
2nd Nov 2011 00:28am
Thank you Grace. Graceful it was of you to stop by, stay afloat; summarize and take it in. :)
Planted furrows. Yes.
Planted furrows. Yes.
2nd Nov 2011 12:47pm
The collective immediacy of emotions......POWERFUL
Welcome to DU. You are amongst family.
Cheers
Welcome to DU. You are amongst family.
Cheers
2nd Nov 2011 1:19pm
Wow. Feel so welcome here already.:)
Thank you Kym. You made me feel so warm.
The collective immediacy of emotions.. yes!
Warmth and light.
Thank you Kym. You made me feel so warm.
The collective immediacy of emotions.. yes!
Warmth and light.
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2nd Nov 2011 2:30pm
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3rd Nov 2011 4:58am
Anonymous
6th Jan 2012 10:26am
'life kicks in at the ceasura...'
amazing lines...im so pleased having come across this poem..short, simple yet so unique...great job Mr. Wand...
:P
amazing lines...im so pleased having come across this poem..short, simple yet so unique...great job Mr. Wand...
:P
6th Jan 2012 2:50pm
17th Feb 2012 6:15am
Whitewand6
Yes..a fulfillment..the victory..
The realization.
The moment of most intense pleasure..a desire.
A concluding action and a perfect beginning
at the same time.
:)
Yes..a fulfillment..the victory..
The realization.
The moment of most intense pleasure..a desire.
A concluding action and a perfect beginning
at the same time.
:)
17th Feb 2012 10:24am