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if I could

If I could;
I'd give you my eyes so you can see the perfection god created when he created you. My nose, so you can smell the luxurious scents you put off into the air. My hand so you know when you need me, you'll always have my helping hand. My shoulder so when you need it the most, you have one to cry on. My heart, because it beats for and only you. My soul so it will never die, it'll always stay lit from the love I have for you. And finally, my body so I can show you how much I love you. Actions speak louder then words and right now, I'm screaming from the rooftops hoping you'll hear my love for you in the night sky when you dream. Hoping you dream of me and never have a nightmare again.

But who am I kidding, you don't even share the same feelings that I have for you.

Written by yinyang

(Cortney)

Published 31st Oct 2011

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Atropabelladonna (Atro)

31st Oct 2011 2:28am

If you ever saw me, you can say you've seen nothing. If you ever felt me, you can say you have felt empty. If you ever kissed me, you can say you've had night shade. If you have ever walked with me, you can say you've walked alone. If you have ever cared about me, you can say you know what death is. If you have ever been me, you can say I've too wrote these words. If you have ever judged me, you can say I am a fallen angel. If you have ever loved me, what could you say?

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yinyang (Cortney)

31st Oct 2011 6:50pm

I would say, in simplicity that there is no words to explain the feeling I have for you. No words could explain how you make my heart jump, twist, do back flips and many more. How so many butterflies consume not just my stomach, but my whole body. Loving you is a drug I don't want to let go of and a high I refuse to come down from. No matter how many nights alone I've spent, I had you in my memories and dreams, its like you're actually there. When I see you, I see more then nothing. I see everything. I see your hurt soul begging to fly. I see your damaged heart.. Still fighting to beat. When I feel you, I don't feel empitness, I feel coldness. You have so much pain that I want to heal. When I kiss you, I have rays shining all throughout me. Nothing dark about it. When I walk with you, I feel like there is nothing but us. Basquing in eternal love. If death is who you are, want nothing to do with life because I won't ever believe in changing you. You're perfect the way you are and have been through everything. Quite amazing and breathtaking I might say. You're a fallen angel sent to come here and show me what its like to know imperfection and love it perfectly. No judging you, just pure love. :)