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[b][b]YOURS

My hearts afire
With burning desire
I need you to quench this flame

I'm holding you close
As the momentum grows
And I'm screaming and moaning your name

Nails digging in
You're penetrating
Bouncing up and down on my frame

Your hitting my spot
Damn it's getting hot
As you decide to redirect your aim

I see the intensity
As you're staring down at me
And I realize this is not a game

You're here to let me know
that no other man can ever go
In the pussy in which you just came[/b][/b]

Written by lailapenn

Published 26th Oct 2011

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Mark Your Territory Gurl..................

Anonymous

26th Oct 2011 6:05am

"You're here to let me know
that no other man can ever go
In the pussy in which you just came"

I like the 3 line rhyme scheme. Creates an interesting rhythm.

I like your style : )