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Surrounding Infinity
I can see the moon embraced
strangled
tangled
and tightly laced
by the obesity
of the heavy water bearing clouds
I can see it fall slowly
like in water
from the infinity that surrounds.
Reflecting the combustion
of the solar flare
a reflective
directive
naturally operative
forever been there
beaten up
misunderstood
dusty ,has no blood
sattellite
of suspension in the air .
It gives off a marble reflect
a second hand prospect
of pearled stone
throughout the darkness
and mysteriousness
of a world thats so alone .
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Published 20th Dec 2009
| Edited 5th Dec 2013
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22nd Dec 2009 6:59pm
dark and mysterious. Completely engrossing; I love the way you keep the rhythm throughout this.
"I can see the moon embraced ,
strangled ,
tangled ,
and tightly laced"
Your use of imagery is amazing, particularly those lines; they were my fave ^^
"I can see the moon embraced ,
strangled ,
tangled ,
and tightly laced"
Your use of imagery is amazing, particularly those lines; they were my fave ^^
23rd Dec 2009 11:30am
Thankyou for reading and for your comment . Such feedback is not only greatly valued ,it is a syncro in the gearbox of progression .:))))))))
