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it's a dark night
and a lost night
and a thin
wasted moon
it's a ghost moon
a pale moon
and it gives me
no light
and you
you have changed now
you have changed us
to no more
so just leave me
you just leave me
you just leave me
alone
you
have decided
have decided
your heart
so just leave me
you just leave me
you just leave me
alone
- - -
it's a dark night
and a lost night
and a thin
wasted moon
it's a ghost moon
a pale moon
and it gives me
no light
and you
you have changed now
you have changed us
to no more
so just leave me
you just leave me
you just leave me
alone
you
have decided
have decided
your heart
so just leave me
you just leave me
you just leave me
alone
- - -
Published 9th Oct 2011
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Anonymous
- Edited 9th Mar 2020 10:35pm
9th Oct 2011 4:18pm
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14th Oct 2011 4:53pm
have been experimenting with using more repetition, but experimenting with using more repetition,
constantly using more repetition, while fun at first, this constant repetition, is driving me
crazy, really, totally, driving me crazy, must stop, must stop this, but stopping it, don't
know how to stop it.
constantly using more repetition, while fun at first, this constant repetition, is driving me
crazy, really, totally, driving me crazy, must stop, must stop this, but stopping it, don't
know how to stop it.
Anonymous
- Edited 20th May 2020 11:37am
28th Oct 2011 5:15pm
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28th Oct 2011 9:29pm
Anonymous
- Edited 17th May 2018 7:36pm
29th Dec 2011 5:23am
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30th Dec 2011 5:09pm
though, technically, since a word rhymes with itself...
(ha, just being a smartass, thanks for liking it)
(ha, just being a smartass, thanks for liking it)