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Love For Life?
On the other side I can see him
Neither here nor there...
Perhaps somewhere in between...
Maybe even just... A dream?
My tears are his laughter
Pushing thoughts from my mind and into his own
He takes the stand
An audience of one, I am force to watch the show alone
With mirrored eyes I can see only but a reflection
...Not of me but rather something-- Or someone else...
Like premonitions of death the pictures are dark
But with the curtain uncalled "the show must go on"
His porcelian doll eyes yeild no remorse...
A life left unlived these visions run their course
Sacrificing love for life
I was forced to watch my mother die
Left behind, a soul by thine own hand...
A darker chapter still left to see?
Or am I simply catching a glipse of what could of been?
A "dark passenger" I'm seeing just the same...
Written and published by A Nameless Traveler A.K.A. -Andrew F. R. Kerklaan
Neither here nor there...
Perhaps somewhere in between...
Maybe even just... A dream?
My tears are his laughter
Pushing thoughts from my mind and into his own
He takes the stand
An audience of one, I am force to watch the show alone
With mirrored eyes I can see only but a reflection
...Not of me but rather something-- Or someone else...
Like premonitions of death the pictures are dark
But with the curtain uncalled "the show must go on"
His porcelian doll eyes yeild no remorse...
A life left unlived these visions run their course
Sacrificing love for life
I was forced to watch my mother die
Left behind, a soul by thine own hand...
A darker chapter still left to see?
Or am I simply catching a glipse of what could of been?
A "dark passenger" I'm seeing just the same...
Written and published by A Nameless Traveler A.K.A. -Andrew F. R. Kerklaan
Published 28th Sep 2011
| Edited 17th Mar 2012
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29th Sep 2011 00:28am
29th Sep 2011 6:35am
29th Sep 2011 6:52am
you ever have a moment where your reality is taken over by a daydream but its not like a daydream but rather like a horrific scene? that's what this stemed from
15th Oct 2011 4:08am
Pushing thoughts from my mind and into his own
He takes the stand
An audience of one, I am force to watch the show alone
amazing :)
He takes the stand
An audience of one, I am force to watch the show alone
amazing :)
15th Oct 2011 4:36am
haha I'm glad you enjoyed that! :D Also I am very greatful for the compliment, thanks for taking the time to check me out :) if I can find some extra time I'll try and look into some of your work too
The dream of other dimension while breathing here is pretty much confusing indeed,tends to question the basic phenomemon.
Just because you seen the other world don't expect people to understand that how freakingly scary and amazing it was,
for you know the truth but they don't.
Though its a intellegent piece to carve what you dreamt.
Just because you seen the other world don't expect people to understand that how freakingly scary and amazing it was,
for you know the truth but they don't.
Though its a intellegent piece to carve what you dreamt.
6th Mar 2012 8:22pm
Thank you for the comment. I've actually had a few experiences like that but one of them I'd chalk up to bad decision making... (I'd rather not give refference as to reframe from soiling my self image) but the rest were seemingly random and without cause. Very stange though indeed.
They say dreams are windows to other realms but sometimes it seems as though these dreams may "slip" sometimes. Truly in explicable in its happening but still ever more fascinating.
They say dreams are windows to other realms but sometimes it seems as though these dreams may "slip" sometimes. Truly in explicable in its happening but still ever more fascinating.