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Semi Suicidal
I feel insane.
I just can't take it.
It drives me crazy everyday.
I can't continue to fake it.
Fake being happy.
Every damn day.
I'm just depressed what can I say.
I don't mean to rant like and emo kid
I probably sound really lame.
I know my problems are no worse than yours.
Everyone is in pain.
People ask you how long you've been suicidal.
Like my brain keeps track of time.
I'm such a pussy, all I do is bitch and wine.
What can I say I'm sick.
Sick of life,of all of it.
But like I said I'm a pussy
I won't do a thing.
I'm just semi suicidal
And will always be.
I just can't take it.
It drives me crazy everyday.
I can't continue to fake it.
Fake being happy.
Every damn day.
I'm just depressed what can I say.
I don't mean to rant like and emo kid
I probably sound really lame.
I know my problems are no worse than yours.
Everyone is in pain.
People ask you how long you've been suicidal.
Like my brain keeps track of time.
I'm such a pussy, all I do is bitch and wine.
What can I say I'm sick.
Sick of life,of all of it.
But like I said I'm a pussy
I won't do a thing.
I'm just semi suicidal
And will always be.
Published 21st Sep 2011
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I like how you write from what seams like personal experience and pain, I can relate to that in the way as that is how I to write, and you seam to use your own reflections on semi suicidal cases. Because you your self are probable semi suicidal. message me we seam to have quite a lot in common in the ways we write. Maybe we could help critique each other, and make one another stronger better writers.
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