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What if?
When I look my little brother,
the way he plays,
so innocent and nice
so beautiful and kind.
All I ever wondered was,
What if
he ends up alone?
When I die,
what if he has no one
to take care of him..
What if,
he dies?
the way he plays,
so innocent and nice
so beautiful and kind.
All I ever wondered was,
What if
he ends up alone?
When I die,
what if he has no one
to take care of him..
What if,
he dies?
Published 17th Sep 2011
| Edited 24th Oct 2011
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19th Sep 2011 00:34am
the trapping of this feeling is all consuming......it can only be cured by positive thinking.......the causation of your pain comes through nicely....and simply....constructed.
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24th Oct 2011 3:11pm
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24th Oct 2011 3:26pm
thank you, and, I'm not a big fan of making things fancy, if you read some of my other poems you could see that :), but I always like to hear other people's honest critique :)
Anonymous
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24th Oct 2011 3:48pm
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