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school life
left behind
childish expectations
low confidence
self hate
depression
my other sweet and pretty
half
my other dark and growing
part
some other soul
lost
in others time
lost
in my own memories
loss
of being
lost
childish expectations
low confidence
self hate
depression
my other sweet and pretty
half
my other dark and growing
part
some other soul
lost
in others time
lost
in my own memories
loss
of being
lost
Published 14th Dec 2009
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17th Dec 2009 3:24am
More clean than spare. A transition in a life, the before and after,
lined up back to back like tiny bookends. The visual rhythm of the
placement of the words matches the spoken rhythm, matches the meaning.
(Liked it.)
lined up back to back like tiny bookends. The visual rhythm of the
placement of the words matches the spoken rhythm, matches the meaning.
(Liked it.)
