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Beautiful
"Beautiful" by Gal E. Cohen
Legendary power withholding the universe
Cursing and feeding on innocence lives
Appealing and appearing elegant to the human eye
Approaching in silence and leaving with pain
I cannot do so
I can’t hurt a soul, can’t touch a thing
Spending time in tragedies
Feeling deeply drowning oceans
Showing smiles to cover up
Locking away any threat
Stepping back from opportunities
Living in fear of reality
Dreaming, waiting, hoping to hear truth
Legendary power withholding the universe
Cursing and feeding on innocence lives
Appealing and appearing elegant to the human eye
Approaching in silence and leaving with pain
I cannot do so
I can’t hurt a soul, can’t touch a thing
Spending time in tragedies
Feeling deeply drowning oceans
Showing smiles to cover up
Locking away any threat
Stepping back from opportunities
Living in fear of reality
Dreaming, waiting, hoping to hear truth
Published 28th Aug 2011
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28th Aug 2011 8:30pm
dis is such a wonderful post
& da thing dat i like da most
is day u described Beauty jus as it is
God Made Beauty & not like doze artificial figures n sho biz
bcuz tru Beauty radiates from da heart
maken it a truly remarkable work of art
& der r so few who wil truly undastand dis
but from wut i no so far u were Created On God's Canvas....;)
& da thing dat i like da most
is day u described Beauty jus as it is
God Made Beauty & not like doze artificial figures n sho biz
bcuz tru Beauty radiates from da heart
maken it a truly remarkable work of art
& der r so few who wil truly undastand dis
but from wut i no so far u were Created On God's Canvas....;)
28th Aug 2011 8:37pm
thank you so much goodest! it means so muc hto me that someone is reading that art of my words <3
28th Aug 2011 8:40pm
i told u i was waitn 4 u 2 post sumthin....lol....& i get gr8 inspiration from readn othas gr8 works....its like fuel 2 me....lol
28th Aug 2011 9:02pm
I'll post another one soon... wow inspiration? you're not at all overexaggerating! haha fuel :)
28th Aug 2011 9:04pm
"Dreaming, waiting, hoping to hear truth"
—this closing line is like a mantra,
to be repeated again and again.
"Legendary power withholding the universe
Cursing and feeding on innocence lives"
—and this is stunning imagery!!!!!!
—this closing line is like a mantra,
to be repeated again and again.
"Legendary power withholding the universe
Cursing and feeding on innocence lives"
—and this is stunning imagery!!!!!!
28th Aug 2011 9:12pm
28th Aug 2011 9:36pm
I agree with dahlusion, "Dreaming, waiting, hoping to hear truth" is a universal song that sings from within one soul to all others.
Indeed, evil veils itself in superficial desires and thrives on the tears of innocence lost.
The depth of your poetry is truly inspiring.
Indeed, evil veils itself in superficial desires and thrives on the tears of innocence lost.
The depth of your poetry is truly inspiring.
28th Aug 2011 9:39pm
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