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S&M Dream
I curse him for his seductive power
I crave his touch and sexual shower
looks me up and down and drinks me in
He takes my mouth and makes me sin
I fall to my knees he’s in control
I lick my lips and take him whole
Hungry for his hard erection
Desperate for love and affection
I please his body, to own his mind
Treats me badly just to be kind
Giving into his sexual fire
So I can be all he’ll desire
Caught up in this naked vanity
My only goal, to fulfil a fantasy
Dragging me into his lair
Forced to my knees, he grips my hair
Painful thrusts as he enters my seam
He’s just a player in my S&M dream.
I crave his touch and sexual shower
looks me up and down and drinks me in
He takes my mouth and makes me sin
I fall to my knees he’s in control
I lick my lips and take him whole
Hungry for his hard erection
Desperate for love and affection
I please his body, to own his mind
Treats me badly just to be kind
Giving into his sexual fire
So I can be all he’ll desire
Caught up in this naked vanity
My only goal, to fulfil a fantasy
Dragging me into his lair
Forced to my knees, he grips my hair
Painful thrusts as he enters my seam
He’s just a player in my S&M dream.
Published 16th Aug 2011
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Anonymous
- Edited 14th May 2018 5:40pm
19th Aug 2011 3:04pm
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19th Aug 2011 3:13pm
19th Aug 2011 3:46pm
Thank you, I am new to this and wondered why so few people commented as I welcome any feedback.
It means a lot to recieve positive comments.
It means a lot to recieve positive comments.
25th Aug 2011 12:20pm
Very sexy, sensual and smart. I like this very much. Not crude or obscene, just a powerful fantasy of erotic desire.
26th Aug 2011 12:18pm
26th Aug 2011 7:22pm
i am so glad dat i didnt miss it
but dis selection is Beautifully xxxplicit
not 2 dirty not 2 crass
not at all vulger so da "do gooders" cant call it trash
wut it is is a sheer delite
of a sexually intense site
or mayb scene wudda ben a betta word
eitha way dis is gr8 ms lady....any otha opinion is absurb....lol
but dis selection is Beautifully xxxplicit
not 2 dirty not 2 crass
not at all vulger so da "do gooders" cant call it trash
wut it is is a sheer delite
of a sexually intense site
or mayb scene wudda ben a betta word
eitha way dis is gr8 ms lady....any otha opinion is absurb....lol
16th Sep 2011 5:39am
Anonymous
- Edited 15th May 2018 7:56pm
17th Jan 2012 5:33am
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Anonymous
6th Jul 2012 10:30pm
Nicely done. I like the line "I please his body to own his mind" It hints at the essence of S&M play - the sub is really the one in control.
15th Sep 2012 5:36am
Ah a subs dream.
In the state of suspended frustration, the smallest exotic reward gains intensity.
good poem thank you.
In the state of suspended frustration, the smallest exotic reward gains intensity.
good poem thank you.
19th Feb 2014 7:03pm