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No Other Day
give me no other day
where Your sun does not shine
who they were, who they came from,
unknown to me
how they smiled, how they lived,
no more to see
I speak not as a nation, I am not so
just a human being, whose voice through these words must flow
evil is not Your world to become
no other day where my heart is cold and numb
give me a day of Your sun shining brightly
a day that is full of laughter and love,
a day that defines the word FREE
into God's arms, we cast you all into heaven
Peace be unto you and your families
God give us no other day as nine-eleven.[b][/b]
where Your sun does not shine
who they were, who they came from,
unknown to me
how they smiled, how they lived,
no more to see
I speak not as a nation, I am not so
just a human being, whose voice through these words must flow
evil is not Your world to become
no other day where my heart is cold and numb
give me a day of Your sun shining brightly
a day that is full of laughter and love,
a day that defines the word FREE
into God's arms, we cast you all into heaven
Peace be unto you and your families
God give us no other day as nine-eleven.[b][/b]
Published 9th Aug 2011
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10th Aug 2011 3:54am
13th Aug 2011 5:36pm
thank u so much...I appreciate your feedback and your words...very much appreciated!
27th Aug 2011 9:26pm
ur words compell me 2 say
dat i am a fan of ur work ok
bcuz ur words hav so much depth
similar 2 da individualty n ones self
& da way dat u Speak of God
it shows dat ur not jus a fasad
it shows dat u r tru & real
& by definition dat is trill
a tru Blessing 2 us...ur words r da proof
& we need mor yous n dis world 4 da sake of da youth....
dat i am a fan of ur work ok
bcuz ur words hav so much depth
similar 2 da individualty n ones self
& da way dat u Speak of God
it shows dat ur not jus a fasad
it shows dat u r tru & real
& by definition dat is trill
a tru Blessing 2 us...ur words r da proof
& we need mor yous n dis world 4 da sake of da youth....
My king...you are good! Wow, such instant genius I've never seen...except when I look in the mirror...well, you know what I mean... We have adopted a false start.. for our true history indicates we were together...as equals; more than we are now apart... look what you have inspired in me...To do this rhyme-n-reply thing with so much bling...the passion we have for words... are set free and remain in constant motion like an eternal and humble bird... I must admit..I have never seen a man flow...with such power and distinction...kings like you will help us all grow... I thank you for this poetic journey..one I had never ventured before... wherever I am...I plan to uplift others...as long as we remain united...the world is our golden shore...
27th Aug 2011 10:10pm
ur words were like a murmur n my heart
not a complete skip but a really good start
& as a ppl we all must unite
bcuz who nose....He Might Come Back 2nite
wil we b redy....wel no1 nose 4 sure
but as long as i hav breath i wil endure
all da obstacles & struggles set b4 me
bcuz my reaction 2 dem wil truly define my destiny
& wit u n my corner mor strength has ben gained
dats jus my truth....i hope urs is da same....
not a complete skip but a really good start
& as a ppl we all must unite
bcuz who nose....He Might Come Back 2nite
wil we b redy....wel no1 nose 4 sure
but as long as i hav breath i wil endure
all da obstacles & struggles set b4 me
bcuz my reaction 2 dem wil truly define my destiny
& wit u n my corner mor strength has ben gained
dats jus my truth....i hope urs is da same....
Obstacles and struggles..I know all too well...these words are kind of my "liberty bell"...I cannot lay down in defeat...I keep pushing forward with a gift given to "be"... From a power Greater than both you and me... How blessed we are, and for the world an appetizing and refreshing treat!
27th Aug 2011 10:37pm
wel da actual fact is
dat i do dis outta practice
jus so my skill wont get relaxed
so wen its time i can take it 2 da max
& deliver His Truths 2 all da world
especially da women & girls
bcuz even doe yall r da most Beautiful unda da sun
i am so glad dat im not 1
bcuz yall suffer such pain & disrespect
& da weakest of u wil let da negativity infect
every inch of der essence & den spread it 2 all
& if da woman aint happy den da hole fam wil fall
dat y i always sho da utmost respect
bcuz wut u put n is all u can get
& if my words can help 2 make yall a lil stronga
den we wil hav no choice but 2 liv betta longa....
dat i do dis outta practice
jus so my skill wont get relaxed
so wen its time i can take it 2 da max
& deliver His Truths 2 all da world
especially da women & girls
bcuz even doe yall r da most Beautiful unda da sun
i am so glad dat im not 1
bcuz yall suffer such pain & disrespect
& da weakest of u wil let da negativity infect
every inch of der essence & den spread it 2 all
& if da woman aint happy den da hole fam wil fall
dat y i always sho da utmost respect
bcuz wut u put n is all u can get
& if my words can help 2 make yall a lil stronga
den we wil hav no choice but 2 liv betta longa....
28th Aug 2011 00:03am
You have ceased to amaze...and your words I treat with respect...
as we the women, are where things began...but somehow, we've been caught in an invisible net...
We have failed to see the true beauty of "we"... that is a disconnect between our people...and that is far from where we should be...
If they only knew our true history...not the words handed down to us in myth...it is not our reality...
For we were kings and queens, pharaohs, and so much more...the passion for the truth has absorbed me...I hope everyone is ready...
because I am about to open the door...
and in that I hope NOT to foster a feeling of superiority..
only to provide truth in that knowledge...we were as GREAT a people as any!
as we the women, are where things began...but somehow, we've been caught in an invisible net...
We have failed to see the true beauty of "we"... that is a disconnect between our people...and that is far from where we should be...
If they only knew our true history...not the words handed down to us in myth...it is not our reality...
For we were kings and queens, pharaohs, and so much more...the passion for the truth has absorbed me...I hope everyone is ready...
because I am about to open the door...
and in that I hope NOT to foster a feeling of superiority..
only to provide truth in that knowledge...we were as GREAT a people as any!
28th Aug 2011 3:09am
every day every hr every & every minute
we need 2 undastand dat He Made us n His Image
& Only In Him can we find Truth
so go tell both da elderly & da youth
bcuz we as women & men
hav His Covenant To Defend
& i wil defend it 2 my very last breath
bcuz dats da only way i KNOW 2 defeat death....
we need 2 undastand dat He Made us n His Image
& Only In Him can we find Truth
so go tell both da elderly & da youth
bcuz we as women & men
hav His Covenant To Defend
& i wil defend it 2 my very last breath
bcuz dats da only way i KNOW 2 defeat death....