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2 second date with a writer
I half watch her
tip-tappiting at the keys
tip-tappiting further into herself
or away
and I like how if I even say a word
the humanity breaks that tip-tappiting
of the keys, distracts her momentarily
to look this way
to where
I have nothing to say
really
but it's good to see her not scowling
once in a while.
tip-tappiting at the keys
tip-tappiting further into herself
or away
and I like how if I even say a word
the humanity breaks that tip-tappiting
of the keys, distracts her momentarily
to look this way
to where
I have nothing to say
really
but it's good to see her not scowling
once in a while.
Published 9th Aug 2011
| Edited 10th Aug 2011
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3rd Mar 2012 10:05pm
Hey R, I really appreciate it. I'll see what else I can come up with for my clamoring audience. Cheers mate.
14th Apr 2012 8:37pm
A job well done, just as my endurance was about to break. The plain simplicity during which the warmth of us is given away in such a few lines, and the perfect closer.
Tres Bien
Tres Bien
15th Apr 2012 10:20am