HYPNOTIC  (IN SPOKEN WORD)

WARM!

The capitalization distracts me so much that i am unable to
maybe enjoy the actual content.
It feels loud, brash and rather in-my-face..

I understand we each have our own way of writing
and this is yours.. I personally prefer lower case.

Potato/potaato, huh ;)

THIS PIECE IS MEANT TO BE AN IN YOUR FACE PIECE AND SO IS IT'S CONTENT...MY WRITING IS TO SHOW THE BEAUTY AND DISTINCTION OF BLACKS THAT HAS BEEN DOUBTED AND TREATED AS INFERIOR FOR TOO LONG...TAKE IT HOW YOU LIKE...DOESN'T MATTER TO ME...I WRITE WHAT I KNOW AND WHAT I FEEL....STAY TUNED

P.S. I WRITE TO UPLIFT THE BEAUTY OF MY CULTURE...NOT TO TEAR IT DOWN...MAYBE THAT IS THAT PART YOU CAN'T HANDLE?

Since it's meant to be SPOKEN WORD how it's written down is mostly irrelevant (naturally line breaks are important).  You don't need any visual emphasis, spoken word is all about the words.  I think your words in this piece stand all by themselves.

I think this piece is perfectly suited to spoken word, but in my mind I'm not getting "in your face", I'm getting a beautiful lyrical flow that tells the tale of a the history of a race repressed.

WELL THANK YOU FOR THAT...I APPRECIATE IT SINCERELY...AND MAYBE IN YOUR FACE WAS THE WRONG WORD CHOICE ON MY PART...MAYBE BOLD IS A BETTER WORD...

Not at all.. I was commenting about the use of capitals and that i found them distracting, not about culture.
Being proud of your culture is a great thing and i too
am proud of mine.

I'd love to hear this one recited

thanks violet...we are cool...I understand where you are coming from and you most certainly understand me...thanks for the kind words

Spirit you are the truth.. Love the poem in capitalized in YOUR FACE form.. the Sun Children are Rising and Our mission is to awaken nations.. so yes it should be BOLDLY HEARD..

Peace and Light
Amunet

I have a page on fb called LOVE IN SHADES OF BLACK where I will highlight your poem, check it out when or if time permits.. Thanks for sharing..

ONENESS

Wow thank u so much for reading i havent been on here in a while...but i would love the link to the fb page..u can inbox-msg me privately if u prefer...glad you like and appreciate the message!!

The boldness put emphasis on not only the black but of the message of the poem. It  makes shows the bold and uniqueness of black personified. I love your portal of how our black is beautiful, and makes me proud of my culture. I thank you for uplifting my spirit and raise my fist to you in kudos