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Orange
Orange Heels,
Orange Peels,
I hate orange,I hate the way it feels.
Orange Heals,
Orange Pills..
I hate orange,I hate the way it steals.
Orange eyes,
Orange Lies,
I miss you Orange,I miss the way you kill me.
Orange Peels,
I hate orange,I hate the way it feels.
Orange Heals,
Orange Pills..
I hate orange,I hate the way it steals.
Orange eyes,
Orange Lies,
I miss you Orange,I miss the way you kill me.
Published 1st Aug 2011
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4th Aug 2011 2:07am
I really enjoyed this. I've re-"written" this twice...
This piece makes me want to solve your riddle, even though I'm sure i'd be incorrect.
Amused_Muse I must confess, I want more. I need to know more.
Thank you.
This piece makes me want to solve your riddle, even though I'm sure i'd be incorrect.
Amused_Muse I must confess, I want more. I need to know more.
Thank you.
4th Aug 2011 10:03pm
7th Aug 2011 4:24am
This piece is interesting. it stems my curiousity and i can't help but re-read it
7th Sep 2011 1:50am
Thank you,it is an interesting piece to me even,I just kind wrote it without thinking anything.