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"The author encourages honest critique."
Anonymous
- Edited 28th Jul 2011 9:10pm
28th Jul 2011 9:08pm
The title implies something positive, the ending implies something negative. There seems to be an overall disconnect.
To be quite honest, I didn't get a whole lot out of this and not because it's short, just because of the disconnect and that gives rise to a general feeling of incompleteness. It seems like you were stuck for ideas but you just thought out loud and wrote it down.
just the kinda poem i love; one that molds to my mind; one that lets me in (a reader's poem).
there really SO many interpretations: as many as there are readers. here are a few of mine:
1. when you write, don't hold back, use your whole self; then, leave what sticks to the page. 2. write drunk, edit sober. 3. creativity requires the destruction of what was to make the pieces to construct what will. 4. pick out the good stuff, hide the crap.