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Alphabetically relevant attacks.
Acid for your shock attack,
Base to the bombardier:
Combat engage the target souls
Defeat them with a sneer.
Trust me, it's a new frontier.
- -
Asinine comment, derisive snicker
Baleful gaze that begs to bicker
Caustic purport in her eyes
Denotes a wicked surprise:
But unknown to her, I've disrobed her lies.
- -
Accentuate your masterful guile
By calorimetry, measuring men's
Candor by the heat they sweat out
During the moment they see your true ice.
But I suppose you think you can quench them all.
Base to the bombardier:
Combat engage the target souls
Defeat them with a sneer.
Trust me, it's a new frontier.
- -
Asinine comment, derisive snicker
Baleful gaze that begs to bicker
Caustic purport in her eyes
Denotes a wicked surprise:
But unknown to her, I've disrobed her lies.
- -
Accentuate your masterful guile
By calorimetry, measuring men's
Candor by the heat they sweat out
During the moment they see your true ice.
But I suppose you think you can quench them all.
Published 26th Jul 2011
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26th Jul 2011 9:40am
was a fun challenge. Your second section seems like 'D' could use a 'Does' before 'denote[s]' in the spirit of rhythm, but only my opinion. Well done, Mike.
