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Fate and True Love
Why has fate delt such a cruel hand,
She has had me find my true love,
Yet I can not be with him,
He lives to far away,
Miles and miles away,
Fate taunts me every day,
For my love and I talk every day,
Yet we may not meet,
I long for him,
I long to look into his eyes,
I long to kiss his lips,
I long to be in his arms,
But yet I must wait,
But in the time I have to wait,
I may lose him,
I can not bear life if I lose him,
I will take my own life,
I will not survive.
She has had me find my true love,
Yet I can not be with him,
He lives to far away,
Miles and miles away,
Fate taunts me every day,
For my love and I talk every day,
Yet we may not meet,
I long for him,
I long to look into his eyes,
I long to kiss his lips,
I long to be in his arms,
But yet I must wait,
But in the time I have to wait,
I may lose him,
I can not bear life if I lose him,
I will take my own life,
I will not survive.
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30th May 2011 2:44am
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30th May 2011 4:32pm
sigh, She won't talk to me or her cousin, last time we spoke she said she was cutting, Im not sure if I lost her love or she's losing her will to live
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30th May 2011 4:42pm
Ik how it is that is how I lost my x, she moved and she just started cutting then next thing ik is that she won't talk to me
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30th May 2011 4:54pm
sigh my poem scars is the closest thing i can write to say how i feel, and i think your poem is deep, and you know how i feel
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30th May 2011 5:01pm
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30th May 2011 5:12pm
I cut but only not to go numb, and tht suxs idk wat id do if I couldn't cut as much as I do
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30th May 2011 5:37pm
usually writng poetry helps me, and i dont cut for the thrill of seeing blood, i do it to punish my self
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30th May 2011 5:44pm
Poetry has gotten me away from cutting to kill myself, but cutting still helps me stay sane
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30th May 2011 5:45pm
well your a great poet and i cant wait to read more, good thing im following you on here
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30th May 2011 5:47pm
Thanx, I post at least one poem a day, but I really don't think that my poems are that great
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30th May 2011 5:57pm
well i think you are, you problably got ,ore followers on here than i do, i have one and shes my ex
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30th May 2011 8:11pm
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1st Jun 2011 1:49pm