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goddamn you
goddamn you for your adoration
of those truly far greater than me
goddamn you for whoring yourself in all your own brilliance
for a pat on the head or a tug on your leash
goddamn you for the relief you feel
when I leave the room
goddamn you for choking me
with your sincerest pity
goddamn you for your silence
that talks about me behind my back
I know I don't deserve you
I think you do too
goddamn you
of those truly far greater than me
goddamn you for whoring yourself in all your own brilliance
for a pat on the head or a tug on your leash
goddamn you for the relief you feel
when I leave the room
goddamn you for choking me
with your sincerest pity
goddamn you for your silence
that talks about me behind my back
I know I don't deserve you
I think you do too
goddamn you
Published 3rd May 2011
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3rd May 2011 11:23pm
That was great. I feel as if a great weight had been lifted off my shoulders. It speaks to me. keep up the good work.
4th May 2011 7:39am
3rd May 2011 11:58pm
4th May 2011 7:40am
5th Apr 2013 5:45pm
This one speaks to me personally a lot.
I enjoy the language used and how the person written about almost seems innocent yet mocking at the same time.
As if we're almost undeserving and searching for fault, paranoid maybe? That's just my meaning from it.
Anyway, great work. :)
I enjoy the language used and how the person written about almost seems innocent yet mocking at the same time.
As if we're almost undeserving and searching for fault, paranoid maybe? That's just my meaning from it.
Anyway, great work. :)
