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Never Again...
You: Loved me.
[/font]Me: I loved you.
[/font]You: Didn't like who I've become and how I've changed.
[/font]Changed: That's all I've done in your eyes.
[/font]Eyes: The one thing that I see of you at night.
[/font]Night. The one place where I feel comfort.
[/font]Comfort: The one thing I always felt when I was with you.
[/font]You: Love me.
[/font]Me: I loved you, but what you did was too much and things will never be the same.
[/font]Same: Never again..
[/font]Never again...........[/font]
[/font]Me: I loved you.
[/font]You: Didn't like who I've become and how I've changed.
[/font]Changed: That's all I've done in your eyes.
[/font]Eyes: The one thing that I see of you at night.
[/font]Night. The one place where I feel comfort.
[/font]Comfort: The one thing I always felt when I was with you.
[/font]You: Love me.
[/font]Me: I loved you, but what you did was too much and things will never be the same.
[/font]Same: Never again..
[/font]Never again...........[/font]
Published 20th Apr 2011
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17th May 2011 12:43pm
18th May 2011 5:18am
I thought I would try something new. I think it turned out okay, I guess. Thank you.
9th Mar 2012 00:05am
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18th Apr 2012 11:56pm
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29th Apr 2012 3:23am
19th Jul 2012 11:38am
I apprecitate the comments. Haven't really been on here recently due to yet another current deployment. But, since y'all do seem to like these, I'll be sure to post some more of my latest ones on here as soon as I can. Thanks everyone. ;)