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So do I...
She told me that she missed you
She said she yearned to hear your voice
She said the last time that she kissed you
You seemed to be annoyed
She swore she really did need you
She said that she needed to know
If you still loved her
She said she felt she was torn
As if her heart had been broken
I said I knew how she felt
She said she wondered about it
If you’d found someone else
She said she didn’t want to doubt you
But it’s clear to the eye
She knows that something’s not right here
And so do I…
She said she yearned to hear your voice
She said the last time that she kissed you
You seemed to be annoyed
She swore she really did need you
She said that she needed to know
If you still loved her
She said she felt she was torn
As if her heart had been broken
I said I knew how she felt
She said she wondered about it
If you’d found someone else
She said she didn’t want to doubt you
But it’s clear to the eye
She knows that something’s not right here
And so do I…
Published 15th Apr 2011
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16th Apr 2011 1:06am
It's good! I liked it alot. I love the fact that it flows so well togeather. This is also like a story. Poetry is a wounderful art.
16th Apr 2011 1:21am
Thank you;) I'm glad you like it, feel free to check out some of my other poems :D
16th Apr 2011 4:03am
DAMN this is sooooooo good like it makes ke so sad for her but yet it's like wen u find tht one special person you'd du anything to get them back cause u relize tht u actually need tht person in ur life tht u thought u wud b better w/o god this is sooo fucking good bt of course I like all of hem (:
16th Apr 2011 10:33pm
Haha, tank yhuu! Very much. I'm glad your able to get out of my poems what I do when I write them:) Cheerz
-mOnNiE
-mOnNiE
16th Apr 2011 10:37pm
Nice poem sweetie, the flow is steady and just right and the meaning behind it is relatable.
Keep writing sweetie !
Keep writing sweetie !