Fable

You have to explain this one to me.. It sounds good but I'm confused a little..

It is about the mind feeling withdrawn when the body "privately"enjoys her and she enjoys the body of the man. The mind feels jealous of the body savoring her and the fact that she imagines the body pleasing her, and the mind does not have a shape of its own to be loved by her. The initial musings of the mind start with hatred and shape into a gory fable, which reaches its limit when the thought of dead corals arises. But ultimately the mind realises this is the best he can get to ease the grief that plagues his life, so shuddering at the thought of ravishing skeletons, he asks her to close her "gates" and draw his manhood nearer to herself.
     
I have used some subtle imagery, some of them a little sexual:
"Torch him with your sissing sound/Private voyage to bosom profound "..(1)
"When you make him clench 'em teeth/Concealing your taste unmeas'rable"..(2)
"Close your gates ease him near/Ease the grief of a tainted Lear /Let your petals drown his lids"..(3)
(1) is pretty obvious, sissing means hissing, in(2) well you guess what he is tasting lol,  in (3) gates mean hands, the mind calls himself a tainted King Lear( protagonist of a Shakespearean tragedy), and petals,well, I would feel embarrassed to tell you what they mean lol. lids stand for eyelids    
 
There are other images I used but explaining them would require an essay  lol.
     
One can also interpret it in a way that a man is making love to his wife but suspecting she is imagining some body else in her mind, I don't know though how that might fit in.
     
  

Damn thats super sexy ,making love, or having sex, and the mind is jealous I like that.. A little to much.. Wonderful poem love it now lol

You should make the explanation a poem also that was a bit hotter. I like the petal thing pretty erotic..

And I can get what your last meaning is like.. To well actually lol ;)