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8th Sep 2014 11:29am
Thank you for the read Chiyo ... I heard this coming winter is going to worse than the horrors of the last ... the poem just evolved.
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8th Sep 2014 11:35am
the ability to say a lot with few words is always admirable bro....
well done man....
well done man....
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That's what I enjoy most about this form (haiku) ... It dictates brevity. Thanks for read and comment Brotha
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It's interesting you point that out because I did a couple of haiku that were messages about the holocaust and the occupation juxtaposed against autumn and winter ...
... There is a subtext about a brutal end to something that starts soft and innocent ... like most wars.
... There is a subtext about a brutal end to something that starts soft and innocent ... like most wars.
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I'm glad you enjoyed the piece bro, but I hated this past winter and the one predicted for the future ...
There are those moments of silent beauty when it falls but the aftermath is horrid.
Thanks for the read & comment.
There are those moments of silent beauty when it falls but the aftermath is horrid.
Thanks for the read & comment.
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