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the most succulent...
there's always that one
blackberry
that can't be reached,
at least not without becoming
thoroughly entangled in the
thorns and foliage
and twigs and
yes of course I mean
you...
blackberry
that can't be reached,
at least not without becoming
thoroughly entangled in the
thorns and foliage
and twigs and
yes of course I mean
you...
Published 7th Sep 2014
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7th Sep 2014 2:05pm
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7th Sep 2014 7:08pm
thanks, Rina, guess you've
been there too, then...
it's always the hardest to
get, isn't it..?
been there too, then...
it's always the hardest to
get, isn't it..?
7th Sep 2014 3:36pm
Ohhh, dartford, luv :-* ~
This is simply luscious and oh-so-tender, luv. :-*
Mmm...
You got me with this one. ;-*
This is simply luscious and oh-so-tender, luv. :-*
Mmm...
You got me with this one. ;-*
7th Sep 2014 7:10pm
Why take the reachable ones
when there are those
which require at least an effort?
And then ... the reward.
Bleeding and scratched
but a taste like honey on the tongue.
You just made my mouth water
with that delicious poem of yours ...
when there are those
which require at least an effort?
And then ... the reward.
Bleeding and scratched
but a taste like honey on the tongue.
You just made my mouth water
with that delicious poem of yours ...
7th Sep 2014 7:12pm
7th Sep 2014 8:26pm
7th Sep 2014 7:16pm
thanks, Pish, they're my favourite
fruit to pick, as was she for my
partner, but yes, there were many
entanglements to be got through
first...
fruit to pick, as was she for my
partner, but yes, there were many
entanglements to be got through
first...
7th Sep 2014 10:03pm
I believe that,
when a man loves a
woman such as this,
there is hope for humanity.
when a man loves a
woman such as this,
there is hope for humanity.
7th Sep 2014 11:46pm
you speak of a blackberry that represents every precious thing we try to acquire in our tempestuous journey. the sweetness of it...
8th Sep 2014 00:15am