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I rented a room @Dup.com

So I rented a room last week @Dup.com               
Did you know it comes with free poetry                
a view and free coffee?          
My first night at the Inn I ventured        
downstairs, hey? Did anyone know        
Madame Lavender opened a Bar & Grill on Dup?        
I also hear,the Doc, gives free        
medical advice too :|        
she's such a good ole gal "D         
Anyway, a few regulars were scattered about              
some were having drinks while others             
were dancing enjoying the cool menthol stylings             
of John Feddeler, who was at the piano playing             
My Way from Sinatra.        
So,I pulled up a stool and knocked back a few.      
Souladareatease,Poetikmind            
and Xmar82,were discussing      
and debating there own points of views      
while Hashman,Lance,and Sadsmiles,                
were all laughing it up        
and waved for me to come        
join in the convo already in progress.                
"They' good peeps like that."                
Some of my gal pals walked in      
not long after I got there.               
Flowergirl,Crimsin,and Enigma,              
and oh yes, ScarlettA came too !              
Johnrot,came by for a frosty few,                
alongside CraicDealer,Roachmill              
and Poetspeak,              
who drank vodka,"cause he don't like beer "/                
I have been up for almost                
1 1/2 weeks with less than                
1 hour or two a day worth of sleep,                
and I am as manic as an Eskimo with a heater.                
I have acute insomnia since I checked                
in last Monday, and,                
I am as Bipolar as Bananas in Pajamas                
and that stupid fucking purple dinosaur.                
DUP,I raise my cup,please take a bow                
cause this is the best insomnia Hotel around.              
                   
             
             
Note: This was spawned from my insomnia and             
the inspiration is from             
Madame Lavender who wrote a             
Dup story a few years back ")        
                
                                        
 
Written by Zazzles (Elderwoman)
Published | Edited 8th Sep 2014
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