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Sick and sin
To Mailee
Through thick and thin and sick and sin
All right
So here's the deal
You're my best friend
In all the land
We've been through it
Been through the bad
The good stuff too
We've had loads of fun
We'll have lots more
In days to come
The bad is sure to rear its ugly face
Yet we always manage to come through with love if not entirely grace
I'm missing you
I think, mayhap, you miss me too
So, remember this, please, when you can
I'm here, friend, sister, your ever-loyal fan
Through thick and thin and sick and sin
Through thick and thin and sick and sin
All right
So here's the deal
You're my best friend
In all the land
We've been through it
Been through the bad
The good stuff too
We've had loads of fun
We'll have lots more
In days to come
The bad is sure to rear its ugly face
Yet we always manage to come through with love if not entirely grace
I'm missing you
I think, mayhap, you miss me too
So, remember this, please, when you can
I'm here, friend, sister, your ever-loyal fan
Through thick and thin and sick and sin
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Anonymous
- Edited 16th May 2018 10:06pm
7th Sep 2014 3:29am
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7th Sep 2014 4:38pm
Ahhh, SugarSkull, luv :-* ~
At least, I know I'm rhyming this time. :-p 'Tis a bit disconcerting when you point it out and I've not realized it...
Thank you, luv.
At least, I know I'm rhyming this time. :-p 'Tis a bit disconcerting when you point it out and I've not realized it...
Thank you, luv.
Anonymous
- Edited 16th May 2018 11:35am
7th Sep 2014 3:41am
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7th Sep 2014 5:17pm
Thank you, Pamelajohn, luv! :-*
I'm pleased you enjoyed the rhyming.
It is my fondest hope this will bring a smile to her face and joy to her day...
Thank you, again, luv. :-*
I'm pleased you enjoyed the rhyming.
It is my fondest hope this will bring a smile to her face and joy to her day...
Thank you, again, luv. :-*
Anonymous
- Edited 16th May 2018 11:35am
8th Sep 2014 3:22am
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Re: Sick and sin
Your recent personal poems are very readable and give insight into the mundane affairs of an amazing and brilliant person. I also want to compliment you on all your spoken word readings, a demanding art form in its own right.
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Thank you very much, candycrier, luv! :-*
You are so very kind and gracious to me, luv. Without your encouragement and Jack's, I might not have ventured to incorporate spoken word as an integral part of my poetry.
Thank you, luv, indeed. :-*
You are so very kind and gracious to me, luv. Without your encouragement and Jack's, I might not have ventured to incorporate spoken word as an integral part of my poetry.
Thank you, luv, indeed. :-*
Anonymous
- Edited 21st May 2018 7:36pm
7th Sep 2014 7:45am
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7th Sep 2014 5:34pm
Re: Sick and sin
7th Sep 2014 4:48pm
A heartfelt poem of deep and genuine friendship. Struck a chord with me, Savaja. Wonderful!
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Thank you, Chiyo, luv! :-*
Yes, luv, this friendship is deep and abiding, true indeed. I am fortunate, so fortunate, luv... :-*
I am deeply heartened this struck that chord with you, luv, who feels so deeply and writes such heartfelt, evocative verse. :-*
Yes, luv, this friendship is deep and abiding, true indeed. I am fortunate, so fortunate, luv... :-*
I am deeply heartened this struck that chord with you, luv, who feels so deeply and writes such heartfelt, evocative verse. :-*
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7th Sep 2014 5:47pm
Wish I had your gift - not only of writing such gems but also of creating so lovely replies :-) ... Thank you!
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Re: Sick and sin
7th Sep 2014 7:16pm
re: Re: Sick and sin
7th Sep 2014 7:24pm
Thank you very much, Gahddess_Worship, luv! :-*
Devoted friendship it certainly is, luv - truer words have yet to be spoken... :-*
Devoted friendship it certainly is, luv - truer words have yet to be spoken... :-*
Anonymous
- Edited 28th Nov 2018 00:39am
8th Sep 2014 2:34am
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8th Sep 2014 3:24am