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Blue Ribbon
Hands tied tight
behind my back
my eyes widen
my mouth waters
my palms sweat
sitting right there
in front of me
all fresh and warm
not saying a word,
you entice me
to dive in
tongue wagging
my mouth opens wide
i fall into you
face first
wet and tasty
i chomp away
needing some air
i come up smiling
face covered in juice
mouth full of flavor
back down i go
yummy,yummy,yummy
blueberry pie in my tummy :)
behind my back
my eyes widen
my mouth waters
my palms sweat
sitting right there
in front of me
all fresh and warm
not saying a word,
you entice me
to dive in
tongue wagging
my mouth opens wide
i fall into you
face first
wet and tasty
i chomp away
needing some air
i come up smiling
face covered in juice
mouth full of flavor
back down i go
yummy,yummy,yummy
blueberry pie in my tummy :)
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re: Re: Blue Ribbon
7th Sep 2014 00:31am
Anonymous
- Edited 14th May 2018 10:07pm
6th Sep 2014 8:52pm
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re: Re: Blue Ribbon
7th Sep 2014 00:33am
Re: Blue Ribbon
6th Sep 2014 9:31pm
A pabst fan...never would of pegged You for one-I've never picked up the blueberry notes before though. :D
This was a most Excellent dish Hash!!!
This was a most Excellent dish Hash!!!
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re: Re: Blue Ribbon
7th Sep 2014 00:36am
Re: Blue Ribbon
6th Sep 2014 10:36pm
I like that...and pie too. Pecan and hazelnuts in apple pie. Yums. Good read Hashman.:)
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7th Sep 2014 00:37am
re: Re: Blue Ribbon
Anonymous
- Edited 23rd Oct 2019 7:38am
7th Sep 2014 2:08am
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Re: Blue Ribbon
7th Sep 2014 12:01pm
Re: Blue Ribbon
7th Sep 2014 4:53pm
Lol blue berry pie or 'PIE' dipped in blueberries!? lol
Either it indeed sounds very tasty bro! :)
Either it indeed sounds very tasty bro! :)
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8th Sep 2014 3:17pm
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