Kiisha Marie (Test Story Pt. 1)

((A/N: This is simply the first two paragraphs of a story I am beginning to write. Please be honest with your comments. Let me know if there is anything I should change.))
 
The young wolf smiled lightly as she padded into the Lunar Cycle Wolf Den. This was her home, from the delicious, coppery scent of freshly killed venison to the thick, light brown, short furred bear pelts stacked in the storage room. She shook her body, her grey and burgundy fur threw water droplets across the entrance from the pouring rain outside. In a quick movement her bones broke, then slithered like snakes into their rightful places. Her fur fell of in chunks to the dirt covered floor beneath her paws. A low growl emitted from within her being, changing slowly into the high-pitched scream of a woman.
She stood now, in her human form, thin burgundy hair flowed down her pale body to her knees. Her small, feeble hands clutched the rough, grey, cave-like walls of the main room before her violet hues caught a glimpse of her older sister Lafali.