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Quieting
I am a dot on the parchment of time.
I am a drop in the ocean.
There is a stillness between heartbeats.
There is the warmth of the sun reaching
across the sheets, bringing the morning.
I breathe, I am, I breathe...
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Re: Quieting
4th Sep 2014 11:39am
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Re: Quieting
5th Sep 2014 11:19am
Reminds me of a Bukowski piece that starts ...“there is a place in the heart that will never be filled".
Both yours, and his, are beautiful in their simplicity and eloquence.
Bravo!
Both yours, and his, are beautiful in their simplicity and eloquence.
Bravo!
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Re: Quieting
5th Sep 2014 10:52pm
Re: Quieting
6th Sep 2014 2:26am
"Stillness between heartbeats"
So pure..
So timeless...
I really like this piece
So pure..
So timeless...
I really like this piece
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26th Oct 2017 9:48pm
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26th Oct 2017 9:53pm
<font color="blue">blue</font><br><br>[b]bold[/b]<br><br><strong>strong</strong>
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26th Oct 2017 9:55pm
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