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21st Century Courting
He paints his target and sets in for the kill
Of the girl with the purple skirt with the frill.
He thrills her with his overconfidence and
Hence she goes along with the pretence.
Flattery (and drinks) will get him anywhere, he thinks.
And as I catch sight of the fright of his tongue in her mouth
And his hands headed South, I realise
He's right.
Of the girl with the purple skirt with the frill.
He thrills her with his overconfidence and
Hence she goes along with the pretence.
Flattery (and drinks) will get him anywhere, he thinks.
And as I catch sight of the fright of his tongue in her mouth
And his hands headed South, I realise
He's right.
Published 1st Nov 2009
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Anonymous
- Edited 16th May 2018 1:39pm
1st Nov 2009 5:22pm
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29th Nov 2009 12:04pm
Thank you :)
The people I wrote this about are, ironically, still together.
Haha, life can be interesting. x
The people I wrote this about are, ironically, still together.
Haha, life can be interesting. x
10th Jan 2010 8:27pm
this is top! This was the one you sent m before Uni, loved it then, love it now.
11th Jan 2010 3:20pm
Anonymous
- Edited 16th May 2018 1:39pm
11th Jan 2010 5:09pm
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10th Aug 2010 1:44pm
i love the form, and the narrative is striking. simple and provocative.
14th Aug 2010 3:05pm